I know it's frustrating now but try to worry less about (don't let it freeze you) consistency in your making, because if you just keep going, they will work themselves together.
We talked about the emotion words - nervous, vulnerable
Look at Edward Hopper again. Watch for the way things are slightly off and have that breath holding thing going on.
Regarding the gift with the bird: just push it a little further, make it feel a little more believable, we talked about bringing in a little more setting (table cloth and so on) - I like where you were going with the aerial view.
Also think about other ways to fulfill the metaphor (beauty tinged with sadness)
The image with the cards, the joker was a little too heavy handed. However it was good to see your face.
Just keep at it!
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