Chris

You talked about going to Walden as an exercise however the one of you stacking the rocks on the site of the house is worth re-shooting. It fits in with your theme of almost sublime really well. 

Your character is striving for sublime

and as viewers we see that it's not going to happen but we know that you do. The images where that happens are your strongest. 

Think about maybe building a raft. 

This week really hone in on who this guy is. Write a short story about him.